Part 3—The Post refuses to ask: It’s fascinating to see the way the Washington Post reported the story in question.
The famous newspaper’s bungled report ran 1800 words. Beyond that, the report included a pair of graphics, one of which seems to be irrelevant to the questions at hand.
The lengthy report appeared on the front page of Sunday’s editions—the highest-profile spot of the week. The report concerns a type of event our big newspapers have bungled for at least forty years—“huge gains” on a standardized test at a local, low-income grade school.
By now, it’s hard to say that this journalistic bungling isn’t deliberate and willful. In this case, the procedure starts with youngish, inexperienced scribes being assigned to report the story.
In this case, their bungling starts in their opening paragraph, then proceeds onward from there. Assuming that they worked in good faith, these young reporters were unprepared to report a story of this type.
What are the basic facts of the case? How “huge” were the score gains at the local, low-income school?
Once again, this is the way the front-page report started. Basic information is missing right there in paragraph one:
BALINGIT AND SHAPIRO (1/11/15): A grim picture of academic performance was emerging at Carlin Springs Elementary. Fewer than half of the school’s third-graders had passed the reading and math portions of the Virginia Standards of Learning exam, and numbers for history and science weren’t much better.As told by the Washington Post, the story goes like this:
Teachers pored over the data, dumbfounded.
“To get information like that back can be like a shock to your system,” said Mary Clare Moller, a literacy teacher at the Arlington, Va., school, reflecting on test results that came in after the 2012-2013 school year. “You’re just thinking, like, ‘But I taught this information. I don’t understand why the kids didn’t get it.’ ”
Moller and other third-grade teachers devised a strategy for the following fall: They led six weeks of daily test preparation lessons, tracked students’ progress with a new computer program and provided extra tutoring for students who seemed at risk of missing the mark.
Teaching to the test had remarkable results: While the rest of the school continued to flounder under Virginia’s tougher testing standards, Carlin Springs’ third-graders saw double-digit gains across the board, with passage rates between 70 percent and 79 percent in every subject.
In the spring of 2013, fewer than half the school’s third-graders passed the statewide math and reading tests.
The next year, dumbfounded teachers provided six weeks of “test prep” lessons for their third-grade students. Because of this “teaching to the test,” third-grade passing rates jumped by roughly thirty points.
That’s the way the story of told by the pair of young Post reporters. For our money, their inexperience was already showing right there in paragraph one.
This is why we say that:
In paragraph one, we’re told that fewer than half of this school’s third-graders passed the statewide tests in the spring of 2013. We’re given to think that this was a horrible performance.
But alas! We’re never told what the passing rates were for the state of Virginia as a whole. Depending on the “difficulty” of the tests, those passing rates could conceivably have been in line with statewide performance. Or those passing rates might have come close to matching statewide performance on the tests, which are called the SOLs.
And not only that! Later, we’re told that students at the school in question are “largely poor and Hispanic.” But we’re never told how their passing rates compared to those of other low-income Hispanic kids in the state.
How bad were those passing rates on those statewide tests? It’s hard to answer such a question in the absence of statewide comparative data, but such data never appear in this lengthy report. Nor are we told what the third-grade passing rates were like at this school in the spring of 2012.
At one point, we’re told that third-grade passing rates at this school “plummeted” in the spring of 2013. But we’re never told what the passing rates were in the spring of 2012—not even in the graphics which accompany the text.
(Warning! You may think that the Post’s first graphic provides this information, at least “for all four SOL subjects combined.” Careful! Based on data from the Post’s report, it seems fairly clear that this graphic must present passing rates for all the grades in the school combined, not just for third graders. You’ll note that the title of that graphic doesn’t claim that the data are for the third grade.)
Starting right in paragraph one, a lot of info is missing. Most strikingly, we never learn how well this school’s low-income Hispanic third-graders were performing compared to their counterparts around the state. And we’re never given a clear account of the drop in passing rates which occurred in 2013.
By how much did third-grade passing rates “plummet” that year? We’re never given that information! We’re simply told that teachers at the school were “dumbfounded” by that year’s passing rates—and that they devised a strategy to bring the passing rates up the next year.
At this point, the inexperience of the Post journalists struck us in another way. We were struck by how much shaky behavior they described, without ever seeming to realize.
Good God! After those passing rates “plummeted” in 2013, third-grade teachers at this school swung into action. As described in the passage above, they “devised a strategy for the following fall” which included extensive “test preparation.”
To us, the problems with that behavior start right at the top. Let’s consider the role of the state of Virginia.
In theory, if a state offers statewide standardized tests, the state should also prescribe standardized test preparation. Here’s why:
Does extensive “test prep” of the type described really change scores on the SOLs? We can’t answer that question.
In theory, if test formats are so confusing that “test prep” substantially changes scores, then those formats are too confusing. You need better tests.
Let's suppose that such test prep does change test scores on the SOLs. If so, the value of the SOLs is severely undermined if School A provides extensive test prep and School B does not. If passing rates can virtually double based on test prep lessons, then it’s pointless to compare passing rates of various schools from around the state, and it’s pointless to compare some school’s passing rates to those of the state as a whole.
Beyond that, if test prep lessons change scores that much, it makes no sense to use the tests to determine “proficiency” at reading or math. Student A may know just as much math as Student B. But Student A has not been provided the test prep lessons, so his math score may be much lower.
One is “proficient,” the other is not, even though they both know the same math!
At the Washington Post, the young, inexperienced reporters completely accepted the idea that this school’s test prep lessons produced those jumps in passing rates.
“Teaching to the test had remarkable results,” the young, largely clueless reporters wrote at the start of their piece. As they continued, they betrayed no sense that, in passages like these, they are describing a form of anarchy, chaos, bedlam:
BALINGIT AND SHAPIRO: As the teachers celebrated the gains, some soul searching began: They felt uncertain about the accomplishment and its educational value.“We have to try to do what we can to get the kids to pass?”
“I just knew it’s a part of the game,” said Carissa Krane, who taught third grade during the two years the test scores plummeted and then soared at Carlin Springs; she has since moved to California. “There has to be a way to be accountable, and this is the way that our country’s decided we’re going to hold kids accountable and the teachers accountable.”
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Arlington Superintendent Patrick K. Murphy said that Carlin Springs’ gains showed that educators were able to tailor their instruction to fix a problem, acknowledging that part of their strategy involved intensive test preparation, a practice he said is common in schools everywhere. He said he thinks SOLs are not a comprehensive measure of a student’s knowledge and that teachers sometimes put too much emphasis on the results.
“We fall into the trap of wanting to be able to quantify things with a single number because it makes us feel good,” Murphy said.
For educators at Carlin Springs, the tests became a frustrating reality of modern teaching. They know that year-long classroom efforts will be reduced to scores and pass rates.
“It’s just really hard to look at just the numbers, and that’s what we’re judged by,” Moller said. “We have to try to do what we can to get the kids to pass.”
In recent years, such statements have come from schools in cities like Atlanta and Washington, in the wake of cheating scandals that may yet send people to prison. But so what? The clueless young scribes at the Washington Post betray no sense of the problems which may lurk in such comments. They betray no sense of the chaos which is unleashed when every group of third-grade teachers feels they get to decide the proper way to prepare their students to take statewide standardized tests.
In that passage, Superintendent Murphy fails to see the obvious problem with his quoted statements. Is “intensive test preparation” really “a practice [which] is common in schools everywhere?”
Obviously, no—it is not. According to this report, there was no such practice at this school until the 2013-14 school year.
Presumably, a crazy-quilt pattern of test prep obtained in the schools of Arlington, and across the state of Virginia. But if test prep affects SOL scores this much, that means that Virginia’s testing program has virtually no meaning or utility. The teachers and the superintendent don’t seem to see this obvious problem. Neither do the incompetent, young, inexperienced scribes who did this lengthy front-page report for the Washington Post.
If test prep really affects scores that much, then (at the very least) test prep needs to be standardized. Having said that, a very basic question must be asked:
Does test prep affect test scores that much? Does that six weeks of test prep lessons really explain the way passing rates “soared” at this low-income school?
We don’t have the slightest idea why passing rates went up at that school. We do understand the possible scam the Washington Post still refuses to discuss, even after Rhee and Atlanta.
Did test prep really produce those “huge gains?” Tomorrow, we’ll look at the rest of the (possible) story—a possible story the Post has worked to avoid down through these long pitiful years.
Even after the scandals under Rhee—even after the scandals in Atlanta—the Washington Post still refuses to go there! Could it be that something other than test prep lessons produced those soaring passing rates?
Even after Rhee and Atlanta, the Post refuses to ask!
Do we care about low-income kids? If we cared about such kids, would we engage in relentless journalistic scams about their important young lives?
Tomorrow: Even after Rhee, even after Atlanta, the Post refuses to ask
The Washington Post report is probably an example of journalistic stenography. Someone tells them something (our scores are better!) and they write it down. While this can be called "news", it is not good journalism, which would consider checking the facts (are the scores actually better?) and casting a critical eye upon the explanations provided by their single source.
ReplyDeleteIt takes experience to be able to do this in a technical field. Assignment of reporters without the proper qualifications implies, at best, apathy about the quality of journalism in that reporting. A paranoid person (such as me) might assume it serves ulterior motives to make sure no one examines the "news" too closely because the answers might be embarrassing to someone or might undermine the claims being handed to those inexperienced journalists. For example, it would embarrass the state of Virginia if reporters asked why test prep was not previously standardized and it would raise questions about Rhee's claims and the school reform movement if someone were to examine whether such tests really measure learning or are a means of gaming the system. And it would certainly raise concerns about whether Hispanic and poor kids are being properly educated if statistics about their performance were reported in addition to those for the state or district.
DeleteJournalists used to be eager to rock boats by reporting real stories and letting the chips fall wherever they landed. Now they are careful not to go beyond stenography because their jobs are at stake. Parents and kids are the losers because they are being given nominal input into school decisions (via local control) without being given the information needed to use their input effectively.
When I see these posts about education I find myself wondering what other areas of expertise are being treated similarly -- in what ways am I being hoodwinked about fields I know less about than education?
Well, there's health care and its costs; climate change; Ukraine; Israel; Iran; Iraq; et alia.
Delete@ 2:46 it is hard to see from your comment if you have any experience or expertise with anything but paranoia. In what ways are comment readers being hoodwinked?
DeleteFor many years, the Washington Post company has made its money from a subsidiary, Kaplan Inc., which is a corporate player in the education industry.
DeleteBravo.
ReplyDeleteThis is the type of blogging you do best.
The sad irony of this comment is not lost on all readers.
DeleteOne thing about that figure in the Post: assuming the panel on the left are 3rd grade test scores, the post drew it incorrectly, since the 2012-13 scores on the right are all lower than the average passing rate on the left. That's not very likely.
ReplyDeleteSurprised that got through.
It is fascinating to see deivatives of bungle used four times.
ReplyDeleteIn theory, to us, beyond that, beginning sentences repeatedly with prepositional phrases can annoy. But your view may differ.
And not only that. Good God! But alas! There are those paragraphs which begin with incomplete sentences. By now, it’s hard to say that this grammatical mangling isn’t deliberate and willful.
Blogging can be done by "youngish, inexperienced. scribes." Assuming that he worked in good faith, this "young" blogger was "unprepared." That’s the way a post can be written by a "young" blogger. For our money, his "inexperience" was already showing right there in paragraph one. At this point, the" inexperience" of the blogger struck us in another way. At the Daily Howler, the "young, inexperienced" blogger hadn't yet mentioned how dumb we all are. Without mentioning which Washington Post article was in question the "young, largely clueless" blogger wrote a single sentence parapgraph at the start of this piece. The "clueless young scribe" at the Howler betrays no sense of the chaos which may lurk in such literary bedlam. The liberal readers and commenters don’t seem to see this obvious problem. Neither does the "incompetent, young, inexperienced" blogger who did this third report on a Washington Post article.
Not only that. Perceptive readers have known for a whole day that the reporters who wrote this front-page report are young and inexperienced. They’ve spent little time on the public school beat. They have little background in the widely-discussed topic of standardized testing.
DeleteMost strikingly, we learned two days ago the piece was written by a pair of twenty-something reporters; neither reporter has any significant background in education. There is no sign that either reporter possessed even minimal technical competence, or had any real idea what he was talking about. Except one was a she.
DeleteI really like your fan fiction. It's alot like the blogger! Keep at it!
Delete(Warning! You may think these comments provide fan fiction. Careful! Based on language from the Howler's posts, it seems fairly clear that this commentary presents plagiarism from all posts in the series, not just for Part 3. You’ll note that the title of the series isn't the only thing that is repetitive.)
DeleteOh, it's fan fiction all right.
DeleteAfter Atlanta I swore, with God as my witness, I'd never go hungry gain. Now, thanks to the "free and reduced" price school lunch program neither do many of the children about whom, frankly, I don't give a damn.
ReplyDeleteJust from the standpoint of data analysis, for 3rd graders at this school it would be more useful to show a chart of the average score (rather than percentage passing) and show it over a number of years. The change in percentage passing might or might not represent a big improvement, depending on how dispersed the students' scores are. And, looking at several years would help show how usual or unusual the latest year's jump is.
ReplyDeleteI dare you or your commenters to show & document orchestrated cheating in the schools in Atlanta.
ReplyDeleteI dare you.
All you bastards. I dare you.
LG
LG are you serious? It was widely reported. People are being prosecuted. Wikipedia links to various news reports. Some teachers confessed: "Teachers who confessed to cheating blamed "inordinate pressure" to meet targets set by the district and said they faced severe consequences such as a negative evaluation or termination if they didn't.[6]"
Deletehttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Atlanta_Public_Schools_cheating_scandal
Dead serious.
DeleteDocumented?
Wikipedia? Surely you jest.
4100 teachers in the district. 41 charged.
1%.
29 plead guilty. 12 are on trial.
A criminal conspiracy/ I don't think so.
Where are the remaining 4000 teachers?
Show me, Somerby and you remaining bastards.
A conspiracy? I don't think so.
LG
29 teachers cheating on tests is a lot, no matter what their %. There should be 0.
DeleteNo Presidents should ever tell a lie. Washington didn't.
Delete“Oh fiddle-dee-dee” Scarlett exclaimed crossly, with a toss of her head and a dismissive wave of her hand. “It’s barely one percent. It’s always like that with you men!”
DeleteAnonymousJanuary 15, 2015 at 9:45 PM -- Enron had thousands of employees. As I recall, fewer than 5 were prosecuted. Yet, nobody doubts that there was orchestrated cheating at Enron.
DeleteYet another Dinky strawman. Conspiracy evidence was abundant in the Enron criminal prosecution and in the satellite civil litigation. Please cite to evidence of a conspiracy in the Atlanta scandal or STFU.
DeleteNobody doubts you are a horse's a**.
His point was that you cannot assess the presence of a conspiracy by the number of people convicted. He is right about that. I don't much care whether numerous cheaters worked together or independently. The cheating is the problem. Teachers are supposed to teach kids values, both explicitly and by modeling good conduct. That's why cheating is especially bad when a teacher does it. 29 people is not one bad apple. It is a whole barrel.
DeleteNice mind reading 2:16. What does the word "orchestrated" mean to you?
DeleteTo "conspire" would at least suggest agreement to follow the same course of action.
DeleteInstructed to follow a course (and you agree). Or pressured to do so (and you submit).
To say that to demand high performance is a conspiracy? Well, what can I say?
All managers should be similarly charged.
Where are the instructions? the incriminating e-mails? the memos? the meeting notes? Anything. Give me something.
J'accuse!
LG
Lots of troll comments today.
ReplyDeleteMust be the young inexperienced tribe protecting their own.
Delete"Lots of troll comments today."
DeleteAnd only one troll-whiner.